Miami Ink and it’s impact on American society

This is the first draft. Approximately 7 pages need to be added. The focus of these pages should be Miami Ink and it’s impact on American society (reality tattoo competitions, celebrity tattoo artist fame, products and merchandising, overall tattoo popularity). The sources used must be from my bibliography or one or two can be added. Chicago Turabian formatting and citations please. I attached my editing partners critique. Please keep these pages focused.